2011 Swans Season Preview

[alison.z]

Just to get the excitement building ... A season preview I wrote for another site:

2011 Kick2Kicks Sydneys Season Preview | Weekly Tips, Game Reviews and Dream Team tips with Articles of the latest issues of the AFL.

[DeadlyAkkuret]

That's a great preview a.z.

[Margie]

Just to get the excitement building ... A season preview I wrote for another site:

2011 Kick2Kicks Sydneys Season Preview | Weekly Tips, Game Reviews and Dream Team tips with Articles of the latest issues of the AFL.

Good work Alison. You write really well.

[Triple B]

Meet Alison
Alison is a Swans-mad aspiring journalist. She finds it very difficult to stop talking about the Swans and hates spelling mistakes and bad grammar

Geez, I beter watch me pees and queues's.

[swansrob]

Nice write up, Alison.

One thing I noticed though:

Alison is a Swans-mad aspiring journalist. She finds it very difficult to stop talking about the Swans and hates spelling mistakes and bad grammar

You seem to have left out an apostrophe in the heading:

2011 Kick2Kicks Sydneys Season Preview

Sorry, but I'm a stickler for it myself sometimes...

[alison.z]

I didn't do the heading!!!

Haha i had a spelling error in the first paragraph and had to email the site to get them to change it - it was distressing me so much!

[alison.z]

Ok i found another error in my work - I give up and retract that statement about me!

[stellation]

oh oh oh.... how about

It has been a seamless transition from as Paul Roos handed the reigns to John Longmire

This is fun!

[dimelb]

Thanks Alison, nice work.

[Yuri H]

I wood of helped with proofreading! You shood of axed me!

(PS - great article!)

[ugg]

Stop nit picking. She spelled Tadgh's name correctly that's all that really counts in the spelling department over here.

[alison.z]

oh oh oh.... how about



This is fun!

That's the point at which i gave up! I got Tadhg, Hannebery and Kieren all right so i guess it's fine then

[alison.z]

Stop nit picking. She spelled Tadgh's name correctly that's all that really counts in the spelling department over here.

**Tadhg

[stellation]

stop nit picking. She spelled tadgh's name correctly that's all that really counts in the spelling department over here.

[swansrob]

I didn't do the heading!!!

Haha i had a spelling error in the first paragraph and had to email the site to get them to change it - it was distressing me so much!

Should have been a capital...

I'll stop now.