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  • alison.z
    Regular in the Side
    • Aug 2006
    • 988

    2011 Swans Season Preview

    Just to get the excitement building ... A season preview I wrote for another site:

    2011 Kick2Kicks Sydneys Season Preview | Weekly Tips, Game Reviews and Dream Team tips with Articles of the latest issues of the AFL.
  • DeadlyAkkuret
    Veterans List
    • Oct 2006
    • 4547

    #2
    That's a great preview a.z.

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    • Margie
      Regular in the Side
      • Sep 2003
      • 800

      #3
      Originally posted by alison.z
      Good work Alison. You write really well.

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      • Triple B
        Formerly 'BBB'
        • Feb 2003
        • 6999

        #4
        Meet Alison
        Alison is a Swans-mad aspiring journalist. She finds it very difficult to stop talking about the Swans and hates spelling mistakes and bad grammar
        Geez, I beter watch me pees and queues's.
        Driver of the Dan Hannebery bandwagon....all aboard. 4th April 09

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        • swansrob
          Senior Player
          • May 2009
          • 1265

          #5
          Nice write up, Alison.

          One thing I noticed though:
          Alison is a Swans-mad aspiring journalist. She finds it very difficult to stop talking about the Swans and hates spelling mistakes and bad grammar
          You seem to have left out an apostrophe in the heading:
          2011 Kick2Kicks Sydneys Season Preview
          Sorry, but I'm a stickler for it myself sometimes...

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          • alison.z
            Regular in the Side
            • Aug 2006
            • 988

            #6
            I didn't do the heading!!!

            Haha i had a spelling error in the first paragraph and had to email the site to get them to change it - it was distressing me so much!

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            • alison.z
              Regular in the Side
              • Aug 2006
              • 988

              #7
              Ok i found another error in my work - I give up and retract that statement about me!

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              • stellation
                scott names the planets
                • Sep 2003
                • 9718

                #8
                oh oh oh.... how about

                It has been a seamless transition from as Paul Roos handed the reigns to John Longmire
                This is fun!
                I knew him as a gentle young man, I cannot say for sure the reasons for his decline
                We watched him fade before our very eyes, and years before his time

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                • dimelb
                  pr. dim-melb; m not f
                  • Jun 2003
                  • 6889

                  #9
                  Thanks Alison, nice work.
                  He reminds him of the guys, close-set, slow, and never rattled, who were play-makers on the team. (John Updike, seeing Josh Kennedy in a crystal ball)

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                  • Yuri H
                    That One Over There
                    • Aug 2005
                    • 588

                    #10
                    I wood of helped with proofreading! You shood of axed me!

                    (PS - great article!)

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                    • ugg
                      Can you feel it?
                      Site Admin
                      • Jan 2003
                      • 15968

                      #11
                      Stop nit picking. She spelled Tadgh's name correctly that's all that really counts in the spelling department over here.
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                      • alison.z
                        Regular in the Side
                        • Aug 2006
                        • 988

                        #12
                        Originally posted by stellation
                        oh oh oh.... how about



                        This is fun!
                        That's the point at which i gave up! I got Tadhg, Hannebery and Kieren all right so i guess it's fine then

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                        • alison.z
                          Regular in the Side
                          • Aug 2006
                          • 988

                          #13
                          Originally posted by ugg
                          Stop nit picking. She spelled Tadgh's name correctly that's all that really counts in the spelling department over here.
                          **Tadhg

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                          • stellation
                            scott names the planets
                            • Sep 2003
                            • 9718

                            #14
                            Originally posted by ugg
                            stop nit picking. She spelled tadgh's name correctly that's all that really counts in the spelling department over here.
                            I knew him as a gentle young man, I cannot say for sure the reasons for his decline
                            We watched him fade before our very eyes, and years before his time

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                            • swansrob
                              Senior Player
                              • May 2009
                              • 1265

                              #15
                              Originally posted by alison.z
                              I didn't do the heading!!!

                              Haha i had a spelling error in the first paragraph and had to email the site to get them to change it - it was distressing me so much!
                              Should have been a capital...

                              I'll stop now.

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